Final year animation film.
Nowhere near what I wanted it to turn out like, but it was a massive learning process. Can't wait to start my next project!
Some frames seem to freeze but they're not supposed to, only happened after uploading :S
Grate work on the anatomy which seem to have been grate throughout most of the video.
Interesting camera angles and pretty clean animation supported this pretty long animation.
if you want to get rid of the freezes you can try to re-upload the file by going to "edit your video" and you won't lose any of the responses and vies you have now.
grate job overall!
At the 3 min mark theres a group of three friend to beat up that bully.....You need to extend that animation frame it went by too fast for anyone to know. you might want to take that another look.
Oh man I've just realised this! It's not supposed to be like that, it's happened during upload :/
I might try re-uploading, thanks for the feedback
nice animation, just make sure you give some frames more time for the people to understand what happens back there in the ally because I had to freeze the animation really quickly in order to find out what happened!
Some really interesting solutions to otherwise daunting shots. Really glad you went full out on some of the multiplane camera work. I will say there were times when the characters lacked a sense of weight in the scene, but then there were some excellent examples where the characters were very present in the environment. It's tricky even for veterans.
Obviously if you plan to continue with animation, you'll need to put more time in drawing; specifically anatomy. But you have no shortage of personality in your character. I'm sure hearing "you've got great personality" sounds like a cop-out compliment, but this isn't the world of dating. If your character's personality isn't instantly readable at first glance, you need to go back to the drawing board. I had no doubt from the second the kid smiled what he was, and what his intentions were. That is a job well done.
Can absolutely smell the Avery/Jones on some of those centered "contemplation" shots too. Like watching some old Loony Tunes. Be very disappointed if you didn't continue with your work.
Nice animation and the name "kid" fits just right .Its official your main character is Kid ) nice simple, yet descriptive and short name)