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Heatwave Episode 1

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The story begins with netsu traveling to a new town tying to lay low and avoid bounty hunters or the police force but all is not what it seems in this town click this link for better version of this episode https://www.youtube.com/user/BlackPhoenixStudios1
ALSO IF YOU LIKED THE STORY BUT THE ANIMATION CHECK OUT MY OTHER VIDEO TO SEE THE UPDATED ANIMATION STYLE

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This is so laughably bad. I thought these were being made in MS Paint but then upon closer examination, I discovered you are actually using Flash. I have no words to describe how utterly incompetent this is.

All you do is make shitty, two frame loops for all your animation. You can't even animate a real fight, which largely the only real appeal of Shonen anime. You can't even tween a fucking background set from right to left when your protagonist is walking through a town. The default framerate for Flash is twelve frames per second, what did you lower it to? Five frames per second?

Why does he sound like he's walking in auditorium when he's outside? You do know there's like a billion websites that offer free sound effects for this sort of shit, right?

I think the only thing more staggering than how utterly terrible all the visuals are is the unexpectedly high microphone quality. Too bad it doesn't help much since the acting is so God fucking awful. That fakey, bullshit laughter.

The artwork in this is completely, unacceptably, terrible. The men look like women. Learn how to draw a hand with proper proportions. In fact, learn how to draw the human body.

That glaring difference between the background art and foreground art is a sight often used to torture people with Graves' disease. Good to know you're not above Google searching for sky images and pasting them into your background.

It astounds me that you think you're entitled to one hundred subscribers on Youtube when you produce this sort of insulting garbage.

Levionix responds:

Lol that actually is hilarious you really did you're research man

love this, it is similar to my drawing style and this is fresh . You inspire me to do a series of my own, keep it going.

Levionix responds:

Thanks man I wish you the best for you're series as well

The animation is weak, as well as some of the voice actors as if they don't take it seriously. Anyways, all in all it is really enjoyable, [beyond a guilty pleasure]

Levionix responds:

Well for the record this is an older animation check out my newest vid to see how much I have improved but thank you for that critique I appreciate it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WxdZ3Ik0Ng4

while the animation isn't good I really want to see more of this

Levionix responds:

Trust me this is an older vid I've gotten much better I will post clips from the second episode to prove it

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Votes
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Score
1.70 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 2, 2015
1:18 AM EDT
Genre
Action