Think people are missing the "self awareness" present here because you sound young. You've got a solid grasp on the timing. Keep at it, and you'll become a god before your old enough to vote; something many of us will be envious of.
This is based on a true story, I have acouple other things im working on but i thought this would just be fun to tell you guys about. The moral of the story is, Just unpack the first day you get back
Think people are missing the "self awareness" present here because you sound young. You've got a solid grasp on the timing. Keep at it, and you'll become a god before your old enough to vote; something many of us will be envious of.
Thanks :D
True so true also it needs movement you also need a better mic