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Nether Stories: Unpacking

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This is based on a true story, I have acouple other things im working on but i thought this would just be fun to tell you guys about. The moral of the story is, Just unpack the first day you get back

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Think people are missing the "self awareness" present here because you sound young. You've got a solid grasp on the timing. Keep at it, and you'll become a god before your old enough to vote; something many of us will be envious of.

Netheranimations responds:

Thanks :D

I take it you're pretty young.

Honestly, it's pretty bad. There wasn't really a punchline to this "relatable story." It was bland and the art wasn't great. Granted, assuming you are young, there is a lot of potential and you will get better. You seem to have an idea on how to do Swoozie's draw-vlog style, and knowing is half the battle. I'd just spend a little more time on the art and try to think of something you find funnier than perhaps just relatable.

YOU CAN GET BETTER, I BELIEVE IN YOU.

Netheranimations responds:

thanks, basically if i spent more time on this it would be better. I have a project im working on that i've been doing on and off for like 3 weeks now. Anyway thanks for the review.

True so true also it needs movement you also need a better mic