The bunnies are cute as hell. The bit where he's actually reading the facts is a bit cheesy, aside from that the story's pacing was good. Some of the animation was a bit choppy but considering the time frame you had to make a video of this length, that's totally understandable. The ending twist was funny and unexpected and overall the video's very fun. Good job!
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Whoa so glad to have gotten this done on time!
Music by the wonderful Steve Combs can be found and downloaded here!
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(thank gosh for the NG dump)
GoggleKid responds:
This was all kind of one big experimental push for me, it's been a very long time since i've completed a short cartoon, actually I think NATA 2012 was the last time id actually done so. I used to heavily rely on tweening so i really wanted to step out of my comfort zone and stick as much hand done inbetweens as possible which is why things can sometimes seem a little choppy. As for the facts part, i think it was drawn out a little too long so i can agree with that.
Thanks for the review! ✌
Love that style. The only criticism I have is that the first several facts are a bit too slow paced, this is something to keep in mind cause you want to keep the viewer. Plus once it gets back into color the story gets exciting. Keep up the good work!
GoggleKid responds:
Yeah, I'm in agreement with that, honestly this was the first cartoon i tried jumping around with instead of creating it in order and in the end it had gotten a little messy with timing.
Thanks for the review man ✌
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