Nice love it i give you rive star
This is beautiful! The music is great!
This video is fantastic! We need to see more videos like this instead of some other junk out there.
Thank you for this and keep up the good work!
thank you dude
Hey man Thanks this one hit home for me and I hope to see more from you bro don't give up this really really is meaningful to me so yeah keep it up.
thank you very much, it's really nice to hear these lovely responses.
I've got another short film which is effectively finished. We are looking into showing it at film festivals first and then it will go up on Newgrounds.
The animation is good. I suspect with time and practice you could be a great animator.
The plot of the short story is lackluster. This feels like a shorter version of the movie FernGully. What is the message of this video? Is it 'humans are bad, nature is good'? Is it 'humans are destroying the environment and forcing endangered species closer to extinction'? Is it 'locking up wild animals is bad, they should be set free'? You are making a statement with this video. You are sending a message with this video, but it falls flat for me. The giant, monstrous man-made machine that is paving over the wilderness and hurting the environment is a message and a story that has been done to death. The machine isn't based on anything real, so it feels like a person who has only ever heard second-hand accounts about the environment being destroyed and tried to make a short film about it. It doesn't have the feeling of authenticity. I don't think you have ever visited nature.
Snow Leopards are listed as endangered, probably from humans encroaching on their territory. Both humans and leopards are predators and they are competing with each other for the same space. Plenty of predators and prey have been wiped out by humanity over the millennia. In the USA, wolves were wiped out from the lower 48. It wasn't until humans saw the commercial value in keeping wolves around for tourist dollars did people finally try to protect the wolves. Unless an animal has a monetary value attached to keeping it alive, humans are fine with wiping it off the map. If I might suggest, perhaps a better statement to make than 'human is bad, nature is good' would be to show how Snow Leopards are lucrative asset to humans.
I believe you have your heart in the right place, but some more research would benefit both your message and your animation to make it feel more authentic. Keep working hard, your work is promising. I hope to see your future animations get better and better.