This cartoon was very visually interesting.
Your usage of three-dimensional computer generated backgrounds were an interesting decision.
I never seen a stick figure movie utilize such effects before.
The music choice for this submission has often be used in other cartoons.
Your selected song has long been established as cliché.
A more original song would have been a big improvement.
The more original song can potentially establish the same mood as the track used.
The track used did effectively establish the intended mood; However, My brain is not completely associating the music with your cartoon.
If I was to hear that song on it's own.
My mind would directly associate it with multiple sources.
A great music soundtrack not only sets the tone but also creates a recognizable voice.
Original music creates a calling card for your cartoon.
I still consider the music selection to be effective for the established mood.
Lets move onto the rest of this review.
I love the way your stick figure interacts with your three-dimensional environments.
The stick had a very cute design.
I like how you played around with the stick figures facial features.
The stick figure had some good poses near the top of the stairway.
I love the animation used for falling down the steps.
The falling animation moved like a tumble down the stairway.
I love how you used abstract visuals as a representation for pain.
The brief flashes on visual pain were a very effective.
The stick figures pained expression during the fall also sold the effect.
I like this submission.
You did a neat animation experiment.
- Mightydein