This quick little gag made for entertaining submission of a few seconds.
Usually 11 seconds is way too short for a cartoon.
A limited amount of time means proving your point quickly.
I think that has been accomplished with your movie.
The voice actors did a great job.
Your cartoon was based on a web comic; However, the characters in your cartoon display more emotion.
The annoyed man had more convincing emotion.
His body language more effectively sold annoyance in this submission when compared to the original web comic.
This cartoon has really improve upon that web comic.