Now don't get me wrong I like the voices here but seemed like there was a quality issue with one of them sounded a bit low but regardless a good characters design here and I am loving the detail added only problem for me on this one was this epsidoe was just a tad short so you may want to ad to that somewhat anyways and make it longer with a bit more content and such
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Expand this and make it longer make some more content
That's a doorbell.
You did a really nice job with the pemisise, the drawing, and a little bit on the animation, but Kimo is definitley right about the Jaltoid inspire style. Either way you did good.