Very well done
And here was some really nice work and really well done stuff you really put the time and energy into this one and winning a front page award and another one was fitting for a job well done you have amazed me here today with this one it's an awesome piece of animation I love the style you have here and love this film so thank you for doing some quality work here. I don't think this needs any improvements at all
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvements on this fantastic piece of animation
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