I like it
Now here was something that was notbad it had some cool stuff and I say he should have signed the signn. Just because but anyways you have a nice style of drawing and you make some good work here I was highly impressed with the outcome and this was just overall great stuff as how to improve on something I'm not sure but maybe you can ad a bit more flashy effects especially in the backrounds just an idea though
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra and more flashy effects
So he basically wanted to buy a sign...
Great work man!
I absolutely LOVE THESE FUCKING THINGS!!!! you should have your own cartoon series on adult swim!!!!!
I love sarcasm!