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So this was cool another good story here with some drama in the middle it was some interesting dialog seems like everything should have had a faster pace of things though like you should have moved it along faster but really good voices
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the pace of the story somewhat
Great Drama, story, dialogue, animation and I loved the quote at the end (even though others disagree), just one complaint, the narrator of the games voice acting sounds pretty bad. First he doesn't seem engaged (which I suppose may have been the intention), and second he has too much pitch in his voice.
Not sure what drug traimberia was on when she typed her review. I saw the 1 quote you had at the end which doesn't make change the video, and make it a religious video just because of a single religious quote. Their ramblings make no sense in their review, and it sounds like they get triggered over the smallest and simplest stuff so my advice is ignore that review. Put whatever you want into your video's.
Either way I am here to give 5 stars to make up for the -1 they gave you over something stupid like that. I may be an atheist but people need to stop getting so upset when they see something religious in something.
This was all right.