Very good for one of your new animations.
You seem like you have a good Idea of how to act out your animation.
You just need to improve some things. Such as the walking speed. The walking is a bit too slow to keep me on the edge of my seat. The smoothness and fluidity could also use some work, but that will come with experience.
All in all, I see talent in you that is waiting to bloom. Keep it up :)