Very good story
So here with this one you have a good story and the characters are really good here and you have a nice style and the story really does take off and I like what you do with it the dialog also is well done and adds to that story and entertaining point of things so this was a cool little flash episode of a good series here
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these
I'm really loving this series!
It reminds me of Gundam Seed.
I love the characters and story, the dialogue felt real and entertaining.
Hope to see more! :D
this an epic movie, FOR NEWGROUNDS, great animation :D story needs work though, but please keep at it
Mostly... frankly, I see a whole huge collection of all the cliches from every anime about robotech' that ever came and went. Don't get me wrong, it's alright to have influences... But from attitude to specific lines, I've already seen and heard practically every single word of this... It's just nothing too new or inventive...
Please, try to create your own story and the lines and attitudes / emotions to go with it. That will be your best return for the least addition you can invest...
Plenty of battle in this one! It's getting intense.