That's not bad, but make the fight scenes more fast paste
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PILOT - IRIS follows the story of a girl who discovers a hidden power after a chance encounter that almost costs her her life. On her unexpected journey she will meet new friends, make enemies and hone skills that she never thought possible.
Made as part of an MA Collaborative project at the University of Salford.
Re-submitted after fixing a few issues!
Special thanks to our voice actors for lending us their great talent, it really helped put the project on another level and we're very grateful.
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That's not bad, but make the fight scenes more fast paste
Love the idea
I love the idea here of this girl and what evolves it's pretty interesting how it evolves and such the art and graphics are pretty smooth and detailed and the animation is spectacular and dazzling but I think this does needs more effects more dazzling effects as the rest of the film but besides that this was pretty good stuff
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improved effects with the girls each and new change
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I see a clear inspiration on Sharingan :) Other than that, the drawings andcharacter movements are somewhat simple and needs for sure more work. The sounds, voice acting and music is well done and suits well the action and scenes. The motive of that kind of hero with a natural gift, finding herself in trouble because of it and realizing she is pursued because of he nature - that is common, so You have to be really creative to build a good story on top of it.
Anyway, it's well "viewable" and I hope to see something more from the series :)
Why bitch got one eye green and one eye yellow
A lot of potential here! Didn't seem that spectacular at first, but then the demonic girl appears, then her eye starts letting her read her moves, then the umbrella's suddenly a sword... each steps gets me more and more intrigued at watching more of this! Who is she? Who are those people? Who's the demon? What's that mysterious power that dwells within her? Nice animation; great voice acting! Hope this turns into more!
-cd-