I dodnt understand a single thing and can you at least color itI'm a bit disappointed 😔
created by a friend of mine stu-boy and piv-boy reference in second 53.
Created by: Zoe
Animation: [Aled H.]
Music used: Invader Zim - In the Begining
I dodnt understand a single thing and can you at least color itI'm a bit disappointed 😔
The animation was obviously produced by someone inexperienced; However, the entertainment value was still there.
The back and white cartoon could have used a bit more color.
I love the camera angles.
The text was in another language and would make following the story difficult.
Translating the text into English would have been a big improvement.
Perhaps voice actors could have read from a translated version of the original script.
You wouldn't need to alter the Spanish text with translated audio.
The animation can remain entirely untouched with that small additional audio element.
I like how you used multiple music tracks in such a short movie.
Music can be effective for setting mood and sometimes be used to add extra humor.
The animated head bopping to "What is love" is a good example of humor.
The visual comedy broke through the language barrier of this submission.
This was an entertaining first submission and hope to see improvements soon.
I will later judge your better movies by higher standards.
Just continue to practice and pump out those practice movies.
-Mightydein
Thanks for you comment it helped us :)
Ah yes very nice!
fits with the humor and culture of newgrounds i give it 3 stars and think it should pass judegment
:( Wish it was in english.