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Ash gets arrested

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I release a new cartoon every other thursday on my youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/user/HDRevill

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JACK AND JILL DID NOT MAKE IT UP THE HILL!!!!!

Every time Ash was talking I laughed so hard because of his eyes and how he says it. Please more!

Great concept, nice joke but I feel like you could improve in emotions. Both on the animation and the voice acting (though your voice acting is good already!). I suggest exaggerating emotions a bit more like, when the detective 'freaks out' he shows mid emotion, just like he saw something that's not ordinary but not that 'WOW HOLY SHIT WTF WAS THAT?!'. First of all, you have to think; what would a 'normal' person do when some kiddo randomly spins and levitates away? They would be losing their shit! You could draw the person in question like they just saw the most life changing, mind scarring thing ever. (I'm not good at words and I'll gladly draw a tutorial, though I'm not a professional :P) When the guy questions what the fuck did Ash just say he acts like it was just a drunk guy that said a sentence in the wrong order, he, instead, could to be all like 'what the fuck are you talkin' about?!'. When the expression are exaggerated, the animation gets funnier.
I really hope to see more of your works!!!

"et la souveraineté du québec sera réalisée SI...et seulement SI"

That was probably one of your best pieces yet! I loved how unsettling Ash was, and the way he slowly started spinning showed how smooth you've gotten with your animations as of late.

Also, congrats on the P-Bot Daily Pick!

HDRevill responds:

Thanks so much man! I really appreciate it! :D

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Uploaded
Apr 30, 2015
11:19 AM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Parody
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  • Daily 4th Place May 1, 2015