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This was a personalized assignment in my drawing class. so i only had a month to work on it, additionally the fact that I am not very experienced in story telling means it probably isn't as good as it could have been. >.<" but i will work harder in the future! :)

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The framerate on the video was a bit clunky. The story was ok. I liked the animation style.

BitterBrushAnimation responds:

yes it is, :P as stated before the frame rate was cut in half to save time on rendering. since the project was due in one month and i already wasn't able to incorporate every idea i wanted to i had to cut corners some where.

This was some pretty top-notch animation; it would have gone great with some music, though. How come the last five seconds or so were out of focus?

BitterBrushAnimation responds:

thank you! interpret it mate. :)

Technically clunky in places, but visually interesting and I thought the story worked quite well. Congrats!

BitterBrushAnimation responds:

i agree it is very clunky in places. but i just wanted to actually finish an animation for once. so even though i wasn't completely happy with the animation i had to pass it and move on because i only had a month to work on it. iam more proud that i finished a project for once. rather then how it turned out. i can and will do better then this in the future :P

You made a CG animation for a drawing class?

BitterBrushAnimation responds:

yep XD lol "personalized assignment catering to your major, mine is digital media so i had to make an animation revolving around drawing or line making." he is a pretty cool teacher i have to admit :)

That was REALLY well done!! Keep at it!!

And thank you for keeping it black and white! Adds so much to the atmosphere!

BitterBrushAnimation responds:

thank you! i thought it would! ^.^

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3.54 / 5.00

Apr 18, 2015
11:13 PM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place April 20, 2015