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I would have prefer to see different kinda graphics utilized for this movie.

Your cartoon's design has the same look as the madness movies.

A few circles as disembodied limbs onto an even bigger circle.

It's not a very aesthetically pleasing animation look to be completely honest.

The characters don't really have any joints to their arms, legs and body.

The human body has a series of joints connecting limbs, torso, head, ect.

You could practice animation of more complex drawings by utilizing stick figures and animate those sticks using frame by frame.

You can act out your poses onto a recorded video to give yourself reference material.

You can work your way up with using progressively complex animations with increasing improvement overtime.

That madness look was not a very good representation of your movie.

I personally hated the graphics of your movie; However, your drawings are not the only part of the show.

The story of your cartoon is about a man chasing an uninterested woman.

The man buys an expensive item for that girl.

She than only calls that man whenever a bad situation happens.

I like the sick sense of humor utilized in this movie.

The sound design was alright for the most part.

The graphics just need more refinement and polishing as perviously mentioned here.

Keep practicing and start pumping out more movies to improve.

Better luck next time.

- Mightydein

kasper116611 responds:

Thank you for your detailed review, I will try new kinds of animation and develop

Great animation! Keep it up :-)

lol that ending although funny was like dafuq

Very nice, cute cartoon with a unsuspected twist, with very smooth animation! Did not sere that coming, hah! Great work.