Hey Lovelies, this is my game related animation I really enjoyed making.
I did fee l later down the line making the animation, it may seem rushed at points. But I still hope you guys enjoyed it as much I did making it :)
Have a good day and a good night
Id'e love to see constructive comments so I can try and get better at this stuff haha x)
Thanks for watching
Hi Mate,
I have to say I like this 2nd vid over your first submission, your backgrounds as usual fantastic I do see improvement on character design. But maybe more movement for your characters would made the vid alot better. Besides that it was alittle short and I kept wondering thats it there got to me more then that it was getting into interesting. But great job would be a very interesting video game to play look forward to your collab work mate ^^.
So... the rain of darkness..,. disappeared? Animation looks good, but I'm a bit lost as to what's going on. Something in the making? Something based on some scene from some game? When he/she/it opens her eyes after that black stuff I wondered what was on her/his/its head for a moment there, the patch of brown, guess it's light falling down but since we haven't seen anything but darkness under the hood so far it feels out of place, specially when something just happened of which the visual change may have been a result. So, in conclusion, it looks good, but doesn't make much sense to me? Keep it going!
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Hey man, thanks for the review :) I do feel the story in this animation is lacking consistency, Its quite hard to convey what's going on. The rain of darkness is like a power from the box going into him later on making him fly. For a new comer animator, Im still testing the ropes of my story telling and animation skills and i'm really appreciative of your review ^-^
Also yes, the animation is from a scene in the game haha, I felt I did loose myself in the animation and created something I could only really understand because of how much I do love this game haha. I plan to you use your advice for my next upcoming animations and thank you for taking your time to tell me what you thought ^-^
I like such stylized animations, but try to add more keyframes, to soften the animation a bit ;)
Thanks man :) That means alot to me, Ill take your advice into hand in my next animations :)
Love your artwork aswell man :)