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Apr 4, 2015 | 2:39 AM EDT

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Took me a while to make this one, with school and friends n stuff. plus crazy delays, well cause its flash. And yes i should probably get a sound engineer, but i dont have that kind of money. hope you guys still like it.
I'm down to do some simple collabs if anyones down. Just hit me up!

Also, for anyone interested i have the flash file for download incase you want to see how everything was done, its divided into two parts cause its kinda long, you might catch some lazies i did but i dont care. haha


youtube channel: (a sub would be nice;)



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

More, more, and more please. Another voice actor would be nice, but otherwise great job. Interesting storry, made me want more. I look forward to the next installment!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice idea with the .fla files! I do wonder about a lot of techniques other artists use, but for some reason they rarely ever provide a source. Will definitely have a look. The plot was entertainingly random, and that loop when he's hitting the corner of the table hmm... I thought he'd died too.

Only thing that distracts me a bit are the voices, the way they're kinda whispering loudly even for screams, etc, and how the girl doesn't seem very girly. :P Sound quality's good overall though, clear and easy to hear. Nice work!


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CosmicArt responds:

haha thanks, yea i figured, cause i know its something that would have helped me if i was just starting out. we animators gotta stick together!

and yea, its something i really need to work on. its that or i gotta get a little help, which im planning to do very soon.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Well the art style and backgrounds are pretty great, but the voice acting could use some work. I have to admit the voice acting is pretty hilarious in some parts, but pretty much every character is the same voice actor. Keep in mind there is a place on Newgrounds where you can find some voice actors who can help you. Hell, even I could help you out some. Still pretty great movie. Keep it up man! :)

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CosmicArt responds:

yea, its always the voice acting -.- haha thanks for the comment


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Really cool animation. The only thing you have to improve is voice acting, screams, laugh, etc seem so... fake and soulless. Still good animation.

CosmicArt responds:

haha alright, thanks man


Rated 4 / 5 stars

the musicc volume is just right i guess, but the voices are too quiet. it was pretty hard to understand some of the passages. but still nice video.

CosmicArt responds:

thanks for the comment! everything is still a work in progress on my part.