More, more, and more please. Another voice actor would be nice, but otherwise great job. Interesting storry, made me want more. I look forward to the next installment!
Nice idea with the .fla files! I do wonder about a lot of techniques other artists use, but for some reason they rarely ever provide a source. Will definitely have a look. The plot was entertainingly random, and that loop when he's hitting the corner of the table hmm... I thought he'd died too.
Only thing that distracts me a bit are the voices, the way they're kinda whispering loudly even for screams, etc, and how the girl doesn't seem very girly. :P Sound quality's good overall though, clear and easy to hear. Nice work!
haha thanks, yea i figured, cause i know its something that would have helped me if i was just starting out. we animators gotta stick together!
and yea, its something i really need to work on. its that or i gotta get a little help, which im planning to do very soon.
Well the art style and backgrounds are pretty great, but the voice acting could use some work. I have to admit the voice acting is pretty hilarious in some parts, but pretty much every character is the same voice actor. Keep in mind there is a place on Newgrounds where you can find some voice actors who can help you. Hell, even I could help you out some. Still pretty great movie. Keep it up man! :)
yea, its always the voice acting -.- haha thanks for the comment
Really cool animation. The only thing you have to improve is voice acting, screams, laugh, etc seem so... fake and soulless. Still good animation.
haha alright, thanks man
the musicc volume is just right i guess, but the voices are too quiet. it was pretty hard to understand some of the passages. but still nice video.
thanks for the comment! everything is still a work in progress on my part.