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Took me a while to make this one, with school and friends n stuff. plus crazy delays, well cause its flash. And yes i should probably get a sound engineer, but i dont have that kind of money. hope you guys still like it.
I'm down to do some simple collabs if anyones down. Just hit me up!

Also, for anyone interested i have the flash file for download incase you want to see how everything was done, its divided into two parts cause its kinda long, you might catch some lazies i did but i dont care. haha


youtube channel: (a sub would be nice;)


More, more, and more please. Another voice actor would be nice, but otherwise great job. Interesting storry, made me want more. I look forward to the next installment!

Nice idea with the .fla files! I do wonder about a lot of techniques other artists use, but for some reason they rarely ever provide a source. Will definitely have a look. The plot was entertainingly random, and that loop when he's hitting the corner of the table hmm... I thought he'd died too.

Only thing that distracts me a bit are the voices, the way they're kinda whispering loudly even for screams, etc, and how the girl doesn't seem very girly. :P Sound quality's good overall though, clear and easy to hear. Nice work!


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CosmicArt responds:

haha thanks, yea i figured, cause i know its something that would have helped me if i was just starting out. we animators gotta stick together!

and yea, its something i really need to work on. its that or i gotta get a little help, which im planning to do very soon.

Well the art style and backgrounds are pretty great, but the voice acting could use some work. I have to admit the voice acting is pretty hilarious in some parts, but pretty much every character is the same voice actor. Keep in mind there is a place on Newgrounds where you can find some voice actors who can help you. Hell, even I could help you out some. Still pretty great movie. Keep it up man! :)

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CosmicArt responds:

yea, its always the voice acting -.- haha thanks for the comment

Really cool animation. The only thing you have to improve is voice acting, screams, laugh, etc seem so... fake and soulless. Still good animation.

CosmicArt responds:

haha alright, thanks man

the musicc volume is just right i guess, but the voices are too quiet. it was pretty hard to understand some of the passages. but still nice video.

CosmicArt responds:

thanks for the comment! everything is still a work in progress on my part.

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3.32 / 5.00

Apr 4, 2015
2:39 AM EDT
Comedy - Original