That's a rather unusual way to present a story, and I will admit that I was a bit confused when the cop car arrives, those mixture of serious elements with typical gaming parts - strange and new to me. Also, the part in the middle (with the ambulance) was a little hard to watch.
However, I like the atmosphere you create, gritty and friendly at the same time. And music taste is always subjective, but I like the song. As I read in your comments, you did this to... how should I put it?... find a way to handle your emotions? I hope that worked for you.
When I consider that you only had 3 days for this vid, I've got to say this is astonishing well-made!