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Yonder Ho! - Episode 5

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Pete and Blue John go on a fishing trip together, but all they can catch are toasters. What will they do with all the junk they've caught?

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Haha, what a random voyage! Art style's pretty interesting (wonder what program this was made with?), though it does seem a bit simple and scrawly at times. The audio clips occasionally (too loud recording), but overall, it was a fun watch! Keep it going!

-cd-

Bertn1991 responds:

Thank you kindly, Mr. Cyberdevil! You are cool : )

I can't for the life of me figure out how to use Flash properly, so for art and animation I use MS Paint, Sony Vegas, Pencil (A program I use for some animations,) Game Maker's sprite tool (To make backgrounds transparent,) Photoshop (Just for filters, as my computer isn't good enough for the program to practical for drawing.) Just a process I made up I guess. I just pretend like I know what I'm doing ; )

But yeah, thanks!!

I noticed that you have recycled a lot of previously created animation for this episode.

I've often seen that same walk cycle utilized for the little boy during the duration of this series.

I could over look the walk cycle's reuse on previous episodes but it is becoming increasingly noticeable now.

It is perfectly understandable to make use of your archive since it is effective time saver.

Some of this reused animation effects give you more time to focus on other aspects of production.

A lot of the reused animation should be improved upon by applying updates for future episodes.

You still created plenty of new animation along with backgrounds.

The musical soundtrack was a bit more memorable than the previous episode.

The story once again was straight forward but certain scenes dragged.

I would like to see the characters emote more within their drawings.

The little boy could be scarred, mad, sad, happy but in different contexts.

Try to avoid drawing the same character facial expression twice.

I didn't like this episode nearly as much when compared to the others.

I will continue to watch new episodes of Yonder Ho!

I hope my review serves as useful advice for you.

-Mightydein

Bertn1991 responds:

As always, thanks, Mighty. And yes, your advice is always very helpful! Yeah, this ain't the best episode in the bunch, is it? The plot is kinda stupid I guess. You're opinion is very valued to me, because you're honest, yet kind. Oh, and you're gonna love the next two episodes. I just know it! They're my favorites, though, the story is REALLY drawn out and does drag on quite a bit just so you know. I think the music is much better, which I'm sure you can appreciate. I hope you like it : )

Good effort, art is lazy tho

Bertn1991 responds:

Thanks. And I sort of agree with you there. Tomorrow's episode will have better art.

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Mar 25, 2015
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