have a amazing potencial but need more scenes, more this to see,this is very short
creativity=1.5 stars
potencial to be amazing =2 stars
Need adcive putting the guitar(which is in a separate layer) over the body but also underneath the arm.
I understand this is awful but it's rough. Any advice would be very much appreciated.
have a amazing potencial but need more scenes, more this to see,this is very short
creativity=1.5 stars
potencial to be amazing =2 stars
Not shitty at all lol. Just needs color in my opinion.
You put the arm on a 3rd layer, on top pf the other 2. Using the same color for the clothes, and matching it up perfectly will make it look like one piece, and it will blend.
With that being said, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.
If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.
The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission
Good luck. :)
Thanks a lot! Sorry about that my bad, will do in future! :)
I could always go for a good riff.
It's not awful. Make the arm a separate layer in and of itself.