You had plenty of very imaginative situations in the entire movie and a lot of genuine effort went into the movie.
The music used for this movie was very beautiful and served well for establishing mood.
A lot of experimentation went into the movie and certain scenes made your crude drawings look better.
The movie was also very long in terms of run time.
I rarely ever seen newgrounds submissions make an entire half hour episode of their cartoon series.
The increased length kinda hurts your movie in certain places since some scenes tend to drag.
Increased length also eliminated opportunities to fine tune certain drawings.
The increased length also helped your movie in certain places.
You gave your audience an opportunity to learn what makes each character tick.
Character development sometimes needs extra time to be of service towards the plot.
Spending more time in the rewriting stages can often eliminate filler and will significantly simplify production ten fold.
I look forward to seeing new episodes of your series.