I felt that the art style was very rushed and the voice acting sounded like you recorded it from an old mic from the 70's.

Great effort, clearly lots of work has gone into this and the animations really well done especially since its done by one person alone :O I think youd be better to make them shorter, quality over quantity, if you put as much effort into a 5 minute short as you did for this it would be alot more popular, mainly because most newgrounds people have the attention spans of goldfish and wont watch it all. I watched it all because it was interesting to see how much work has gone into it and it was quite enjoyable. Just my opinion, 5 minutes would be plenty, not all series have to be the standard 20mins, look at adventuretime and bravest warriors.. also the cyanide and happiness show is a great example of internet series, started out as short hilarious jokes on newgrounds and eventually got so popular that there was an audiance for a 5 minute series that theyve recently fiished the first one of.. if you havent heard of them you should look them up. anyway yeah good effort and hope to see more in the future

That was pretty good. I'd enjoy seeing this be a regular thing. I like the distinct personalities of each character, and you managed to have a good dose of humor throughout. Nice one mate!

The only nitpick I have with this is that the audio could've been balanced out more. In some scenes, we go from soft talking to really loud sound effect/music. Otherwise, this was really amazing. The artwork, color scheme, and animation was spot on. I wish you the best of luck with your series.