i really liked it. great expression on the roaches face right before he takes a bite of the other is perfect. certainly it could be tightened up a bit, but youre obviously well on youre wayto being a great animator.
You should create Audio first, then make the Animation.
They do eat each other tho.
The ending was sure unexpected. lol
But yeah, you got a pretty neat art and animation style. Love it.
I dont know where to start honestly.
The were very few parts were the animation was on point. The storyline was odd, but concise.
the pacing was a few steps off. But the biggest NO i have for this is the audio quality. I understand that animators on a budget need stock audio, but what they do with that audio is something that takes an understanding of mixing.
Overall, everybody starts somewhere. And now is one of those crutial infantile stages where everything that a young enthuiast, such as youself, is deserving of the tools needed to grow and be better.
I hope this review was of some use to you on your path.
I read all the reviews and then I take notes. This is very important for me and I thank you for that.