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It happened on a dark, stormy reading day...

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I need this book in my life!

Fine animation, nothing particularly interesting here; though the music and character expressions were good.

I like the expressive eyes on your characters.

You played around with the pupils within the eyes to convey emotion and combined it with facial expression and body language.

I like the frame by frame animation used to convey the emotions of the little orange guy.

The other guy tweened towards him and than said a disparaging remark towards to him.

The lip syncing could use a bit of work and that can be improved upon by watching yourself repeat the dialogue in front of a mirror.

Place heavy emphasis on important key words for the lip syncing such as the word; "Ugly" for example.

The lip synching doesn't have to be perfect since you can't really read the lips of a cartoon character.

I like the animation, character designs, music and how the characters convey emotion.

3/5

-Mightydein

I liked the music, it really made it work. The joke was kinda funny. :P

That was random to say the least. The visuals and audio are decent but the video was not that funny. All in all, an okay job.

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3.35 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 14, 2015
1:07 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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