PLOT TWIST

I need this book in my life!

Fine animation, nothing particularly interesting here; though the music and character expressions were good.

I like the expressive eyes on your characters.

You played around with the pupils within the eyes to convey emotion and combined it with facial expression and body language.

I like the frame by frame animation used to convey the emotions of the little orange guy.

The other guy tweened towards him and than said a disparaging remark towards to him.

The lip syncing could use a bit of work and that can be improved upon by watching yourself repeat the dialogue in front of a mirror.

Place heavy emphasis on important key words for the lip syncing such as the word; "Ugly" for example.

The lip synching doesn't have to be perfect since you can't really read the lips of a cartoon character.

I like the animation, character designs, music and how the characters convey emotion.

3/5

-Mightydein

I liked the music, it really made it work. The joke was kinda funny. :P