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The Book

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It happened on a dark, stormy reading day...

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I need this book in my life!

Fine animation, nothing particularly interesting here; though the music and character expressions were good.

I like the expressive eyes on your characters.

You played around with the pupils within the eyes to convey emotion and combined it with facial expression and body language.

I like the frame by frame animation used to convey the emotions of the little orange guy.

The other guy tweened towards him and than said a disparaging remark towards to him.

The lip syncing could use a bit of work and that can be improved upon by watching yourself repeat the dialogue in front of a mirror.

Place heavy emphasis on important key words for the lip syncing such as the word; "Ugly" for example.

The lip synching doesn't have to be perfect since you can't really read the lips of a cartoon character.

I like the animation, character designs, music and how the characters convey emotion.



I liked the music, it really made it work. The joke was kinda funny. :P

It's a little bit short, but gets the point and punchline across. LOL!