Well notbad
Well I must say this was pretty good and the idea and concept on this was pretty good I thaught. But you have presented a nice idea here and the animation was pretty cool and your idea was nice and it all flowed pretty decently I thaught some good ideas ran through here you have a good flash here and I look forward to even more in the future
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Some smoothed details within the animation here and there not much though
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