Hm, Nice. I can see you improved on your combat and took the smoothing advice i gave you. Well done.
Yes, Thanks. Your advice was very helpful.
A decent continuation from the first episode. The ending was a bit random but I will leave that for the next episode. Decent job overall.
Thanks! I really tried to improve the second part because everyone (including you) said that the fight was boring and there was no reason for the fight. So, I'll really try to manage this thing in other chapters and telling all the story, and will try the chapters not to be boring.