I like the bit roughness of the brush strokes and the graphics could be enhanced by utilizing some lights and shadows.
The audio was somewhat scratchy since I heard bad audio artifacts.
Audio can often be effected by the environment of the recording, microphone quality, ect.
The audio recording can be a bit more crisp and cleaner.
This movie only contained an endless loop of one person saying one piece of dialogue.
The anime guy said, "Hello and welcome to WHDC" on endless loop.
The buttons on the top of the screen work and it can mute the annoying loop.
This movie is only one step above a blank screen.
-Mightydein