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I have not animated in over a year an this just a test demo for future animation. I wanted to see if i still got it .

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I know you want the action to be quick, even quicker than the human eye... At the same time, (and maybe a frame-rate issue) things get a little... over-spaced if you can follow my meaning. When the characters would reverse positions (a basic strategic move) for fluidity, I might suggest you work them a little closer together for the fluidity. Let them separate naturally... The flashy screen and suddenly they're opposite from where they started is a little old and used up.

On the whole, I think you still got it. Might be kind of like riding a bike, once you get it, you might get rusty and awkward, but you don't lose it. You have a talent, and I'm not going to beat it up on a lack of story or drama or... (we can just say blah-blah-blah) You get the point, and I know it's just a demo.

The art work was clean, sounds were on time, and everything seemed crisp and smooth for the most part. I think a little polish (even a spit shine might do...lol) and you could stick together a storyline and run with it.

Not too bad as a demo. The scene transitions were abrupt and it seemed like there could have been a few more frames when the fighters were throwing each other around. Still, would be interested in seeing a more complete project from you.

You still got it.

You lose some points because it was a little too short, though.
But don't give it any mind; you've got something great goin' here.

Now do something even better!

The demo was very good. It looks to be a little wonky when you did a cut scene to change the action movement but overall. I say you still have it and hope to see more pixel animation from you soon.

Well, if the rest of this is as good as this was, I think that something might get front paged. I can't write a proper review for this because it isn't the full thing. So far 4 stars. Maybe in the future it'll be more.