Not terrible at all, but you should use neater handwriting, better drawn speech bubbles, and towards the end you went a little too fast for me to finish reading.
LIttle claymation that I did when I was bored. Hope you enjoy!
Not terrible at all, but you should use neater handwriting, better drawn speech bubbles, and towards the end you went a little too fast for me to finish reading.
Please do the text appear longer, thy disappear too fast....