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DRAGON AGE # 1

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Hi All,

Dragon Age episode 1 hope you all enjoy if you want to support me you can follow me on my channel:

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChwIHDTdjcNvqOJQnvEEmdg

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

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This is so true, but I've seen this joke so many times. Also, I got lost scene 2 (0:20)... not sure what's happening there.

Wondermeow responds:

Hi KrustySyrup,

Thank you for your feedback, sorry I got you lost around the 20 sec mark, thats pretty much where the guy ended up wearing the girls armor and loving it. While the female character pretty much has to except it but can't help but be angry so she mocks him.

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

Funny and true about Dragon Age. Good job with the video.

Wondermeow responds:

Hi BlackKitsune42,

Thank you mate ^^ appeciate it.

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

This was a very funny comic short. The voice acting was good and the animation style had me smiling. Love the joke and punchline. I got a kick out of the male character loving his new armor and that smile on his face.

Wondermeow responds:

HI MysticalKat,

Thank you very much for your feedback to kind ^^.

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

That was a clever take on the whole "female armor" joke. I loved some of the comments the guy made; it is pretty cool that somehow he gets the same protection values but now doesn't worry about heat stroke! The voices were clear, but I imagine with more time for animation and crisper audio your stuff will keep getting better and better.

Wondermeow responds:

Hi Mordenglory,

Thank you for your feedback mate ^^ i'll definitly keep working at the animation and audio.

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

Although the art work is pretty legit, the animation could use a bit of work to it. Also try to slow down the pacing. It went by a little too fast. Just keep on improving. Good luck!

Wondermeow responds:

Hi ShaeGuy,

I'll keep working at my animation and will keep note about the pacing thank you for your feedback.

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

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Mar 1, 2015
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