one for the badist things i have done it is a wast of my time dont play ever

Nice first game. I like the part with the spoiler and the spoiler. This is a voice of the generations. I like the wording. The trip isn't going to be easy but I hope it makes it. Sort of a coming of age with nice effects and blinks. Well sorted, well arranged. Don't let this detour you from destiny and keep moving forward. Good luck. gg

well its not to bad for a first try i dont really mind the crappy art but it has far to many movement bugs

The fuck? Sorry bro, but you missed a lot of bases on this one.

1. The Poem made no sense.

2. The game was too short, and the gameplay was simple. Too simple.

3. The music hurts my ears.

You can't just make a game in a few minutes. You need time, so you can polish it so it can be a great flash that people enjoy. Also, some people don't appreciate no-effort games made with Stencyl.

Take the time to learn how to make an !enjoyable! game.

Alright, to be brutally honest, The music is annoying, the art is less then poor, the poem is hard to read or even understand. I don't really know if this could classify as a game. I mean no offense, at least you tried, but I feel I wasted my time interacting with it. I'm fine with a poem in a game, but there is a right and wrong way to incorporate it. 1. less annoying, or more fitting music. 2. readable, understandable text. 3. perhaps more detailed graphics that make some inkling of sense toward the story or poem. I honestly feel like this was an attempt at trolling and may have wasted my time even trying to offer constructive criticism.