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Reviews for "ghost desert"

Nice first game. I like the part with the spoiler and the spoiler. This is a voice of the generations. I like the wording. The trip isn't going to be easy but I hope it makes it. Sort of a coming of age with nice effects and blinks. Well sorted, well arranged. Don't let this detour you from destiny and keep moving forward. Good luck. gg

Nuuup responds:

Hey bcunderscore ! Thanks for the review !

I feel like it wasn't the best place to stop with the last room, because the lunchslapper screamed, then what happened? It left me with a feeling of unresolved conflict. But I liked it anyway :D

Nuuup responds:

The game is meant to have that ominous feeling. And thank you :D

well its not to bad for a first try i dont really mind the crappy art but it has far to many movement bugs

Nuuup responds:

the movement thing is intentional ;)

Alright, to be brutally honest, The music is annoying, the art is less then poor, the poem is hard to read or even understand. I don't really know if this could classify as a game. I mean no offense, at least you tried, but I feel I wasted my time interacting with it. I'm fine with a poem in a game, but there is a right and wrong way to incorporate it. 1. less annoying, or more fitting music. 2. readable, understandable text. 3. perhaps more detailed graphics that make some inkling of sense toward the story or poem. I honestly feel like this was an attempt at trolling and may have wasted my time even trying to offer constructive criticism.

Nuuup responds:

sorry but i dont troll people ;)
trolling is bad mkay

What even is this. The music is really annoying. I can't critique the poem because I couldn't read it through the graphics. And the graphics. OH, the graphics. The game looks like it was drawn by a 2 year old! The color choice for the cacti (I think) and the ghost (or whatever is on parts 2 and 3) practically makes my eyes bleed! And don't even think about going off the bottom of the screen, because you won't come back! Or maybe you should. It would make it end quicker. Not even half a star.

Nuuup responds:

thank you