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Blackclaws

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Genero:accion,comedia,gore,sobrenatural
Florence verela es una ciudad tranquila para los ingenuos ojos de la gente porque por las noches es visitada por dark souls(almas oscuras) Lorena Shinzou es una cazadora de almas tiene un ojo rojo y piel oscura dado a que ella al igual que estos espectros viene de lo mas profundo del mundo de la oscuridad ,en la tierra se cruza con Maria Terranova un chica "normal" de una escuela catolica hija de una madre superiora la monja mas respetada de toda la ciudad es una chica solitaria dado que tiene un problema de doble personalidad,los caminos de Lorena y maria se cruzan dado que maria siempre de algun modo termina cruzandose con darksouls luego aparecen otros personajes como Barbara una policia retirada empeƱada en liberar civiles que son poseidos por las noches por estas almas oscuras y Michael un joven que tiene el poder de un alma oscura que le gusta pelear con espectros fuertes

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Your work is a tad choppy...I think you need to up your frame rate and that should smooth out. Ask others in the forum, who knows, maybe Tom F. might help you with a tip or twenty. This looks really cool and all. Art's fine, might could use a touch up here and there, a little neon for brightness and such. Let's see what you can do, eh?

FotAnimaciones responds:

oh thenks good coment

Animation is choppy. other than that i didnt see much of anything else besides some of the actual art work.

FotAnimaciones responds:

okay

3 stars, is that ok???

FotAnimaciones responds:

3 star is good

Over all, a pretty good job, whether an intro or trailer...
Still the animation is a bit rough and choppy (at least on my system)... and there are a few places where the art itself needs a little work for consistency's sake. Mostly, it just needs to get another few hundred look-overs and some polish as you work through the gritty details.
Relax... Breathe... It's ambitious... but I promise, you will get through this. You only need to try and keep at it.

FotAnimaciones responds:

okay good coment

Not bad, but it needs some work.

Music is not original I'm going to guess?

FotAnimaciones responds:

no,the soundtrack is not a original

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Feb 25, 2015
9:26 PM EST