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Gangs

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WHAT IS A GANG?! this question isnt answered in this 2D/stopmotion short!!!

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Okay... Even as a joke (and assuming against the whole gang/criminal activity/violence associated with it) you have a theme to work with. Thereby, with even a tiny bit of research, there should be a plethora (an obscene amount) of material to work with.
You have other potential issues, but those are just as equally arguable as "style difference" so I'm not about to beat you up for choppy animating and stuff... I'll reference "Technical Dave" as a series you might check out (in case you haven't already) and you can see how it can work for you.
As an artist (in my opinion and experience) when someone sees your work, they should either love it or hate it. You don't really achieve anything like that. It's just a little... "drab" maybe, or possibly "vanilla" would be the better term. You've picked a rough and rugged subject matter to deal with. It's widely viewed as a scourge around the world, and whether or not you agree with the ideal, you should present your views. Be brave, because (and I've posted this same line countless times before) "Art is not for the faint of heart"...
There will always be haters out there. I'm just offering a little "cultivating" advice to help you add to your next work. Be a little more stark and even snarky about it. Make waves... Hell, even make a little trouble.
You risk being forgotten shortly if you don't.

UTAKU123 responds:

hey thanks for you're time, it is a bit of a joke that it isnt really about gangs, just a person exploring life but some of the stuff you said struck a chord, thanks for you! my next one is a bit risque you might enjoy it more.

Not Funny what so ever.

UTAKU123 responds:

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There was not even a gang in this even though that's the name. The voice acting and animation could be better

UTAKU123 responds:

It's a joke

The animation is decent, but I don't understand the A rating. T should be enough.
The voice acting is not very clear.

Nothing much else to say.

UTAKU123 responds:

Okay the a rating is technical, thank you for ur comment

it did make me laugh, but was shorter then i thought it would be.

UTAKU123 responds:

happy too hear it made some comedy ^_^ all of my stuff is a bit short, i might work on it

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Feb 24, 2015
9:29 AM EST
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