You got good ideas. Keeping making stuff till you're good at it.
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I do not own anything! The music belongs to steven universe "Dance of Swords"
I made this in my spare time, but please do not rate harshly im a new animator yet i would like to receive criticism, if you like the video rate and follow me. THX!
Bulbasore responds:
Thank you, i will keep trying to improve myself!
That was pretty good for just starting out. Here is some criticism since you wanted it. I would recommend using sound effects and some more shadow details to your characters, so they don't look as flat. Also, nice choice of music. Steven Universe is amazing.
Bulbasore responds:
Thank you for the criticism i will consider these good ideas next time im at the drawing board.
By the way thx i love steven universe even if its a kids show , the music is amazing!
I would say this is a good start for a new animator, but not upload-worthy. The music doesn't fit the theme, and artwork seems a bit rushed, and anything where a Kirby is sliced in half should make baby pandas cry. The animation itself was quite fluid. I would say work on making the artwork a bit more symmetrical, and changing the music to something a bit more "epic battle-y"
Bulbasore responds:
Thank you for you perspective on my animation. kirby being sliced in half was kinda funny to me because i would not think that would happend!
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