Some good Motion Graphics there! Isometric view was definitely a good decision to give the piece a bit depth and more interest. Masking the globe gave a very nice effect, too.
Some timing issues here and there, but generally a very nice piece.
Author Comments
The general idea was to create an add animation in a 2D software such as Adobe Flash to look as a 3D animation.
Problem solved by making some isometric kind of illustrations.
If you don't mind my two-cents' worth... It sounds like you're soundtrack is from a software for text-to-speech... Not that it's terrible, but I think you'd have been better off to read the lines for yourself. Even send the lines to someone else to be read... Just anything to sound a little more... um... human.,
Other than that... The repetitive almost "gif" like replays are... well, less than pro'. You know? It comes across as a little bit "lack-luster" where I'm sure that you could accomplish better, cleaner, and a more polished "feel" to the advert'. We, here at Newgrounds, don't have a big problem with advertising. We're a peer-review site so you'll get critiques, and I'm only pointing this out because I've earned myself a notoriety for being a "fairly harsh" critique running... LOL
Frankly, keep at it, and get someONE to do a read-over of the lines... Try to get a more human sound, and you'll not only put out something that works and attracts more attention, but you'll likely draw more business (since it would seem that's what you want)... You'll get there.
Don't forget to breathe, relax, and then resume... You really just need a bit of polish on this.
JulianBlau responds:
Thank you very much for your feedback.
It is really helpful and I will try to improve myself in the future.
I know that that voice it doesn't sound good at all but I just used what my uni group gave to me. In a real situation I will not going to use something like this.
By the way, this is not a real advert, it is just a Uni project. Everything about that company is fake.
Why are you Still Using Flash?
I like how this reminds me of flash submissions in the 2000's