Nice Story, But Needs work
You did a nice job on the story line, animation and story where balanced nicely. BUT I hated how you looped "Romeo Must Die" over and over to the point where I started to hate it. I dont think you tried hard enough to work on the music- Do yourself a favor and get some audio editing software. Learn to do some sound mixing, and combine it to the music. In flash make the audio stream , so IF THE USER PAUSES THE VIDEO THE MUSIC STOPS PLAYING. Anyways keep working on it.