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Goku VS Vegeta

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I do not own the sprites music ect. Please leave comments on how I can inprove as this is my first animation

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Or we could just watch DBZ

DDO-Productions responds:

hmm xD

classic i like 5/5 :D

This was not that bad...the audio quality makes it a bit of a problem to watch but if everything had been stepped up a bit this would have been an awesome experience...the worst part being that it ended very abruptly and with not context as to why..

DDO-Productions responds:

Ok Thanks!

Eeh~ Nice Job.

Well this was pretty decent for a first animation, but there are some problems.
1. In some scenes, their was white showing on the edges of backgrounds. You should try to stretch out backgrounds a bit more.
2. It's kinda weird to have voices in this and yet still have text boxes. I'd recommend sticking with only one of them.
3. At 00:23, If that is suppose to be smoke, then you need to learn how to make it fade out instead of having it just stick there for the rest of the video.
4. There could be more animation in the sprites.

Just keep on trying, and you'll be a great animator. Good luck!

DDO-Productions responds:

Thanks!

Credits & Info

Views
1,792
Votes
6
Score
2.67 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 17, 2015
12:04 PM EST
Genre
Action