well, this was a totally incomplete flash that you sent, so in some future you are going to make it complete!!!

Needs a play button for sure to increase functionality flash was also not all the way done

.........Why Did You Make It!....

This Is Shit.......Whats The Point In Making It If You Have No Play Button And Its UnFinished!!!!

not my type

i couldn't watch it all the way , i sall worse so you get a ten

In need of a play button!

Otherwise, I quite liked it. The dialogue was difficult to discern, so I think subtitles would have been a worth attribute to have considered. Nevertheless, the graphics, animation and voices were all done well, although the contrast of sound was rather forced. By that I mean, sound effects too loud, voices to soft and such.

I'll watch the second (complete) one for comparison.

~VelvetDarkRocks~