UPDATE: The swf. file I uploaded wasn't how it was supposed to be. THe white background was not supposed to be there. So I fixed it. THANKS!
Bit hard to hear what the animator's saying with hat morphed voice of his, background sometimes don't fill the entire screen, line-works a bit sketchy/unevenly thick/etc and animation not always the smoothest, but it did entertain! Plenty oh humor in the script. Keep it going!
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I just rewatched the cartoon! THis is not supposed to happen! Hold on. I'm going to fix it.
Where do I start. You really need to stretch out backgrounds because you can see white in half of them. The art work really needs more effort put into it, not to mention the animation. Although the artwork for the Halo suits and guns are pretty legit, but that is not enough to give this a good rating. But seeing how you at least tried to make a legit movie, I'll give you 2/5. Just try harder next time. Good luck!
I just noticed that the white background is not supposed to happen. I'm trying to fix it now. I'm changing the file to an mp4.
I'm going to base this on the fact that you seem new at animation and that you have the potential to improve. The comedy was okay in parts, although a heavy reliance on memes and slapstick should be avoided in my opinion. The animation was mostly stiff but this is something I feel was not a huge issue and you can work on. All in all not terrible but needs a great deal of work.
I've been animating for about a year. I started this in March and worked on it on and off. This script is a year old and I've written the next Chris and David and I think I fixed most of those problems. The animation was mostly tweening, because the Halo armor was a complex thing for me to control without tweening. that explains the stiffness. I agree though, I look at the script and realized what I've improved on. But I still think it's entertaining. Thanks for the comment.