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FEAR: Claustrophobia

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This is the first of a series of cartoons exploring human fears and nightmare scenarios. This one is based on a nightmare I had when I was a kid.

I was inspired to make this when I stumbled upon a web comic series called 'Deep Dark Fears' which also lead me to rediscover André Franquin's 'Idées Noires' (Dark Thoughts) which I read as a kid. So I got to it and worked on it non-stop from New Year's eve.

Making this has been a strange experience for me, somewhat cathartic.

Thank you for watching.

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Wow, that was pretty dark.

charliemakescartoons responds:

It was, wasn't it? my next short will have a lighter tone, stay tuned. :)

Seems like there are more phobias mixed in herre, fear of not being able to move, fear of drowning... it's a pretty dark animation, albeit with that beautiful scene right after. The way he wakes up again, I guess he's not actually in a tiny cubicle, just crazy. The expression doesn't seem the most despairful, but the voice does, nice work!

-cd-

charliemakescartoons responds:

Yeah the first thing I'll fix is the expression. Also I can dig your interpretation of the ending.

Thank you for watching. :)

I've given you the 5 because I have seen the growth in your work. It's progression overall from start to finish and it's a brilliantly crafted exploration into this Fear. However the feedback below touches on all I was going to suggest in a nutshell. Good work man and keep up the good work.

The story told is great, and I like the way it's imminently relatable, seeking something like atonement under the pressure of a phobia. While I can understand you based this particular vid' on a real nightmare, I might also suggest (in a revisit) that you consider cutting to the absolute essence of the phobia, itself. I might also suggest (in a revisit) that between now and then, you take a serious study on the "face of fear".
The reference to revisit is admittedly from the suggestions above and already a possibility in your mind, so I'm thinking it would be a great idea to revisit this at some later date and see how you've grown as an artist and a storyteller. I personally saw only a limited expression of fear, but heard a linear travel through anger, terror, and self-atonement, so maybe, just a little more detail around your character's face...? It shouldn't take much to arch eyebrows and put a furrow or two in the forehead and bridge of the nose.
Of course, as you can see by the rating, I liked this. I certainly wouldn't demean work like this in the slightest. At the same time, it's a practice among artists and storytellers to return to older works for revisions to reflect upon their growth and journeys. My suggestions are only meant to offer something you might find valuable in the future should you come back to this and watch it before you re-animate.
As a fellow intro-spective and an explorer of the darker side of our humanity, I certainly look forward to your next.

charliemakescartoons responds:

Totally agree on all points. This was a purely introspective work and a cathartic exercise so admittedly I could have done more research.

There are some details I wanted to add but was limited in terms of computer space (however I do endeavour to remedy that asap). The details on the face are an easy fix so I'll definitely include those on the revision.

I think this is something I will take some time to revisit later on when I've gained more knowledge and grown more, I don't see it as a failure but can see where it needs improvement. I'll take the lessons learned from this along with your suggestions and apply them to the next episode.

Thank you very much for taking the time to watch and providing your input, it's greatly appreciated. Feel free to PM me if you have any other suggestions.

As scary as this is, it's quite beautiful. One who is trapped under the weight of his greatest fear and looks for atonement. The score was very beautiful as well as the imagery that occurs after he is submerged. Great job!

charliemakescartoons responds:

Thank you for your kinds words.

I was fortunate to find this score in the audio portal, it just naturally fit. :)

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Uploaded
Jan 6, 2015
11:52 AM EST
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Experimental