Unoriginal as fuck.
I told myself I wasn't allowed to sleep til I made a cartoon. I did it.
Unoriginal as fuck.
I......love it!
I like the idea behind this flash, it reminded me of the Africa Dudes flash from back in '10. Having said that I think it would of been improved by added a little bit more character movement, an arm moving, the TV guys head turning. I understand that this would have been more work and you didn't wish to sleep until you had finished but maybe it wouldhave been better if you had given it a bit more time. Maybe stay up an see what you write/record and then spend time animating it the following day. That way you get the "Improv" feel but with a better quality animation.
I'm not too sure about the breaking of the fourth wall at 01:08, it all seems to fall apart at this point. I'd suggest get a few random cue cards or something to bring up in the conversation. More things to bring up like the Heroin at the beginning.
I think you took the Improv thing to seriously. Like your character said "you gotta plan shit out". I do like the idea behind it though.
I was gonna go on and on about why I really did this animation, but I'll just try to explain it in short. I haven't had the time or energy to animate for a long time, so I told myself "I need to make a cartoon tonight, no matter what". And I did. This was completed in 2 hours. I figured the cheap look would sort of drive that point, but it seems people didn't get that, because I'm getting really judgmental and condescending comments about it anyway. I equate this to a quick drawing in my sketchbook, it's just practice, just like everything else I've put up here. in no way is this the full extent of my skill.
if you want to see me actually animate, check out "Limbo Stuff", that's what it looks like when I actually put effort into something.
Lol this is a funny joke. Good work!
Nice sketch! I really like that morphing animation that starts it all, and then follows: random dialog. Creative and entertaining!
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