Ok so, I just watched 1-4 of this series and I figured I would leave some thoughts on it. First, the bad: The characters need better introductions. Pretty badly, to be honest. By that I mean their names need to be made clearer sooner. In a story that's this scale with so many people and sub-stories to keep track of, making sure your audience knows the names as well as the faces is super important. Also, the animation needs a little work. Nothing major, but I'm noticing a few things here and there- movements that don't look quite right, awkward proportions, that kinda stuff. I also have a few problems with a few art style choices E.G. the missiles that the frames fire look kinda weird, and a few of the effects. Also, some of the audio needs work. That said, you've done a really good job of splitting the story up to keep track of the other characters while still keeping the main character the focus of it. Like, a REALLY good job. The premise is also pretty interesting and the ominous implications that "nothing is as it seems" looming ahead really adds to it. The characters are pretty well developed and interesting- they all definitely have a unique story of their own and the way you tell it indirectly adds a lot to their mystery. All in all, pretty good! This could be like, the next TOME.