It took me half a week to make my first piece and here it is.It's short but I believe this is delicious. And the misic is from the game"Tower of greed".
I guess the point was that, as he was accidentally stabbing his hand with chopsticks through the carton, so a giant accidentally stabbed its hand through, presumably, the cardboad into its own hand? So was the Foodie a bacteria living on the hand of a giant? Doesn't make much sense, but you definitely know your stuff.
Although you showed technical skill, an animation is nothing without purpose. This had a story that was simple, yet confusing all the same. Not much context for the plot, but I did like how you worked the camera angles, the different perspectives, and the conscious decision to discolor the blood out of consideration for the potential audience.
Still, it just wasn't that interesting.
Man that was... pretty disturbing. You'd think all the blood when he was accidentally stabbing his hand would've been enough, but then a giant accidentally kills him and eh... that's all. :/ Kinda sad ending. Was definitely an abstract piece though! Animation smooth and brutal. Nice work.
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Good movie, but I'm not sure how to take it.
He kind of reminded me of a bear, not sure if it is though. But don't get me wrong, this flash was pretty good! Had some simple music, fairly good animation, and I liked the odd kind of edge it had. It may have been random, but I still found it artistic.
I suggest for next time possibly slowly everything down a few paces. I feel as if that would give it a smoother run.
3/5
~AJ~
Cool ! I didn't find these point while making this stuff. Thank you for the advice~
I don't really know what to think of myself anymore... ;)