YOur art, shading and key frames are good. But there's a lot of dead space in the cartoon and the vcam jumps around a lot and gets disorienting. Try making your vcam movements smoother as well as your characters movements need inbetweens. But keep it up dude, it was funny!
Kinda short, but aside from that this was pretty funny. Also nice art and color scheme. Keep it up! :)