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Demotivational Speaker

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Woah. This cartoon took me seven months to produce. It's late at night now, and I literally just finished this, and while it's probably now the best time to upload, I'm doing it anyways. Anyways, see ya later, Newgrounds friends!

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You're coming a long way man! Keep it up, you're going places chief!

urbfilms responds:

Thanks, Sketch! It means a lot!

The idea is pretty good and the style is not that bad either. I just wish it would have been paced a lot faster. Sometimes satire and jokes work best if you don't let much time to think about them.
Your lip shapes are fun to watch but actual motions seem to be going too fast and with no real weight. Play around with the exposure times of drawings a little more, leave some time to really see anticipation and the end of a motion. Keep working and practicing! Looking forward to more stuff...

urbfilms responds:

Thank you for the honest review. I'll try to add more weight and movement in my next animation.

I once made a short 6 minute and 30 second cartoon in a little under a week. That is why we plan every little detail. To make it done faster. That whole 7 month thing. No. Just no. And I didn't even work on it all day just 20 minutes each day. Well then again maybe it was an hour. Look all I'm saying is that you should find a way to do things quicker than 7 months.

*after watching the video*

Lol I think he killed everyone! And that poor horse looked like his feelings are hurt.

urbfilms responds:

Thanks for the review! I guess I do need to plan more.