You manage to tell the story trough an animatic, which can be challenging, so great job on that!
Drawings, voices and visuial blending effects fit's together in the style and unite's the piece
Pretty good story telling, visuals, and voice acting. Keep it up! :)
Art is a bit weird, but I read the issues. Totally cool.
Awesome, i cant wait for this project to come to fruition, it will be amazing.